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The Mirador, Chapter 12: 4,602 words
Chapter 12 is now very short, partly due to a couple of stupid scenes getting axed, and partly due to my realization that there was Too Much Stuff in it and it needed to be two chapters.
Note to self: give soirées a chapter to themselves in future (not that we're going to write any more of them, precious, because we're not) and save yourself the bother of separating them out in a later draft.
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matociquala has convinced me that Felix should be played by Jeremy Brett.
And I don't usually post lines from works in progress, but this one deserves it. Felix Harrowgate, disposing of an adversary: "You're incompetent, darling, and really I can't think of a worse thing to say about anyone."
Chapter 12 is now very short, partly due to a couple of stupid scenes getting axed, and partly due to my realization that there was Too Much Stuff in it and it needed to be two chapters.
Note to self: give soirées a chapter to themselves in future (not that we're going to write any more of them, precious, because we're not) and save yourself the bother of separating them out in a later draft.
matociquala has convinced me that Felix should be played by Jeremy Brett.And I don't usually post lines from works in progress, but this one deserves it. Felix Harrowgate, disposing of an adversary: "You're incompetent, darling, and really I can't think of a worse thing to say about anyone."