3-4 unpublished erotic fantasts hardly count but.. You could try intrernalising the problem. Have your females inability to talk become the explicit issue in the story. Have someone really get on their case for it & force them to do something about it even if only bloody the protagonists nose and walk away (but don't leave it at that have them gpo away into a dark corner and solililoquiise about WHY they always handle problems this way. Hope this hasn't pissed you off too much
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momijizukamori
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Date: 2006-07-06 11:02 am (UTC)You could try intrernalising the problem. Have your females inability to talk become the explicit issue in the story. Have someone really get on their case for it & force them to do something about it even if only bloody the protagonists nose and walk away (but don't leave it at that have them gpo away into a dark corner and solililoquiise about WHY they always handle problems this way.
Hope this hasn't pissed you off too much