Go you on the words -- I'm rooting hard for you :-)
The counting rhyme -- I think many counting rhymes are creepy and reach something deep and scary, in a good way. This one has the right kind of metre and the first line is beautifully creepy. Skipping, jumping rope, some kind of intricate thread-the-needle/crack-the-whip game would go to it very well.
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Date: 2007-06-05 05:35 am (UTC)The counting rhyme -- I think many counting rhymes are creepy and reach something deep and scary, in a good way. This one has the right kind of metre and the first line is beautifully creepy. Skipping, jumping rope, some kind of intricate thread-the-needle/crack-the-whip game would go to it very well.