still going strong
Oct. 3rd, 2005 04:56 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
truepenny"The Ghoul Hunters" now has:
(a.) a finished draft: 5,500 words
(b.) a new title: "Blue Lace Agate"
(c.) and a tweaked opening line that's got better kick:*
It needs:
(a.) 500 fewer words, for preference
(b.) a consistent voice
(c.) a sequel
The sequel already has
(a.) a title:"A Night in Electric Squidland"
(b.) an opening line:
Yes, I'm having a good day. Let's all revel in it while it lasts.
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*I think the idea of shoggoth larvae came from![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
slithytove and his sourdough starter. slithytove, if you object to my use of your larvae ... oh god that came out SO WRONG ... *ahem* slithytove, if you would prefer me not to borrow the concept of shoggoth larvae from you, please just say so. I can make 'em oviparous or something.
(a.) a finished draft: 5,500 words
(b.) a new title: "Blue Lace Agate"
(c.) and a tweaked opening line that's got better kick:*
They hadn't caught the shoggoth larva smugglers yet, but Jesperson had other things on his mind: "And, ah, how are you and Sharpton doing, Keller?"
It needs:
(a.) 500 fewer words, for preference
(b.) a consistent voice
(c.) a sequel
The sequel already has
(a.) a title:"A Night in Electric Squidland"
(b.) an opening line:
Some days Mick Sharpton was almost normal.
Yes, I'm having a good day. Let's all revel in it while it lasts.
---
*I think the idea of shoggoth larvae came from
slithytove and his sourdough starter. slithytove, if you object to my use of your larvae ... oh god that came out SO WRONG ... *ahem* slithytove, if you would prefer me not to borrow the concept of shoggoth larvae from you, please just say so. I can make 'em oviparous or something.
