truepenny: artist's rendering of Sidneyia inexpectans (writing: degrading sex!)
Sarah/Katherine ([personal profile] truepenny) wrote2006-05-17 06:21 pm

Slash! Parry! Dodge!

The Mirador, Chapter 2: 14,874 words
Entirely new words: 3,730. Felix is a prima donna. But we knew that already.



That's a very long sex scene.

o.O

otoh, I finally got a chance to show Mélusine's sexual underworld in action, and I have invented more terminology in the past three days ...

I tried to use "sadism," I really did. And "masochism." But the moss trolls kept tapping me on the shoulder and saying Urr? politely. Because the Marquis de Sade and Leopold von Sacher-Masoch just don't exist in this world, and I know it. You can only be bothered by the Moss-Troll Problem if you know the etymology of the dubious word, or if you know the connotations you will be invoking. "Top" and "bottom" aren't necessarily anachronistic--they're bluntly descriptive enough that parallel evolution seems not unreasonable--but they have cultural context, and their cultural context is not Felix's cultural context. It's the same reason I use "molly" instead of "gay." Because you have to be careful about what you allow your reader to assume they know. You can't invite words in if they won't check their baggage at the door.

[identity profile] dichroic.livejournal.com 2006-05-17 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
I was curious, just now. Google now turns up 10 finds for "moss-troll problem" - 10 different websites. I wonder how many it will turn up a year from now.

o_O

[identity profile] amayaxellia.livejournal.com 2006-05-18 12:47 am (UTC)(link)
Oh I love you
cleverthylacine: a cute little thylacine (Default)

[personal profile] cleverthylacine 2006-05-18 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
This is so going to be worth waiting for :)

[identity profile] lost-romanov.livejournal.com 2006-05-18 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
your icon is absolutely hilarious.

Anachronistic words

[identity profile] dsgood.livejournal.com 2006-05-18 05:17 am (UTC)(link)
Writing fiction set in this world's past or future also brings up problems. I have a long list of political terms which have changed meaning over the past fifty years, and a longer list of ones which have changed meaning over the past hundred years.

Then there's alcoholic drinks. Once, a martini was half and half gin and vermouth. Now it might not contain either

[identity profile] oracne.livejournal.com 2006-05-18 12:53 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY!!!

[identity profile] fidelioscabinet.livejournal.com 2006-05-18 01:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I bless your anti-anachronist heart for this, too.

I remember reading a book by one of the Australian fantasy writers now reaching a US audience, and while I'm not a natural book-thrower (too many librarians and school teachers in the family, I guess) it almost achieved flight when, after a Great Magical Disaster (in a pre-industrial culture, complete with theocracy), the narrating character blithered away over her concern that the survivors would be so psychologically damaged (in those words, those very modern words) that they might never recover. Not "they might lose the will to live", "they might give up hope", not "they might turn their faces to the wall and die". No. They might be too psychologically damaged to recover.
*wipes foam from lips*
I haven't been able to read anything else she's written. She might get better. But I howled like a dog locked out in the rain from the awful.

So yeah, thanks for the tarquins and mollies and so on. Because you're not taking me on a trip through 21st-century America with dragons and funny clothes.