New! Improved! And now with more explainy bits!

[truepenny]

The first four chapter of The Mirador weigh in at 44,668 words. This is 2k down from the previous draft, but not to worry! In Chapter 5, I get to introduce a character who gets to try to tie three different plot arcs together. Whee!

My deadline is three weeks away.

Comments

[larryhammer]

It kinda looks like a bag of clothes, as if he's running away. But those were always carpet-bags, no? And this doesn't look like that.

---L.