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some actual progress
The Mirador
Chapter 8: 14,084 words
Chapter 9: 6,721 words
I'm not actually as productive as this makes it look, because what was wrong with Chapter 9 is solvable partly by fixing what's wrong with Chapter 1 (done) and partly by fixing what's wrong with Chapter 10 (next up on the headsman's block).
But it's still not bad.
And that's the end of Part One.
The work of Jessica Joslin (discovered via![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
ursulav) is hypnotic: both gorgeous and disturbing.
Chapter 8: 14,084 words
Chapter 9: 6,721 words
I'm not actually as productive as this makes it look, because what was wrong with Chapter 9 is solvable partly by fixing what's wrong with Chapter 1 (done) and partly by fixing what's wrong with Chapter 10 (next up on the headsman's block).
But it's still not bad.
And that's the end of Part One.
The work of Jessica Joslin (discovered via
ursulav) is hypnotic: both gorgeous and disturbing.
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