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Fatsis, Stefan. Word Freak: Heartbreak, Triumph, Genius, and Obsession in the World of Competitive SCRABBLE Players. New York: Penguin, 2002.

Stewart, George R. Ordeal by Hunger: The Story of the Donner Party. 1936. 2nd ed. 1960. Lincoln, NB: Bison-University of Nebraska Press, 1986.



Word Freak is an enjoyable book. Not too deep, and I could do with a little less of Fatsis's "goggling at the sideshow freaks" attitude. Perhaps this is because I recognize a number of similarities between the subculture of competitive SCRABBLE and the subculture of science fiction pro-/fandom, and, yeah, the jokes get old. On the other hand, I do very much like the way he charts his own descent (or ascent, depending on how you want to look at it) from relatively ordinary journalist to SCRABBLE geek. He's not a geek at the start of the book (which makes it a little disconcerting to read, if you are a geek), but he is one by the end.




Ordeal by Hunger is, um. "Dated" is the kindest word I can think of. The naivete of Stewart's racism is almost charming--except for the part where it makes me want to throw the book across the room. He's also prone to sentimentality about the heroism of the men of the party and the pathos to be milked from the plight of the women and children, and I object to the explicit trivializing of the children's experiences and equally explicit privileging of the men's: "There is the story, for instance, of how little Eliza Donner cried herself to sleep that next night because Miller had promised her a piece of loaf sugar if she would walk a certain distance, and then had harshly told her that there was no sugar. And then how, the morning after, he would have beaten her because she would not walk, if Foster and Eddy had not peremptorily stopped him. But after all, this is only the pathos of childhood, not the tragedy of strong men in the struggle with death. And before we judge Miller too harshly, we must recall his heroism when on the night of the storm he labored with McCutcheon to keep the fire going. The man had been in the snow for nearly three weeks, and had been to the lake twice; if his nerves were frayed out, we may forgive him." (201). Eliza Donner was three years old and had been trapped in increasingly desperate, grotesque, and outright horrific situations for nearly six months. I can do the math, even if Stewart can't. Also, if we go by his own definition--"the tragedy of strong men in the struggle against death"--I think Eliza's mother, Tamsen Donner, deserves far more attention than he gives her. There's no excitement or romance to Tamsen Donner's heroism; Stewart is really not interested in the people who stayed in the camp by Truckee Lake, only in those who crossed the pass, and thus Tamsen Donner, who refused more than once to make the journey because she would not leave her dying husband, is mostly off his radar. And her death, mysterious and grotesque as it is--she survived everything only to die and be eaten by Keseberg (who very possibly murdered her) less than a month before he was taken out--seems to me every bit as tragic (if we must assign a valuation to such things) as that of Stanton, who made it safely to California twice and died because he came back to help the rest of the party.

But honestly, I object to the imposition of narrative values onto history. Making it into a story--particularly making it into the story of "strong men in the struggle against death"--obscures the truth. Eighty-seven people were trapped on the wrong side of the pass. Forty-two of them (by my count) were children under 18 (and thirty of those forty-two were under 12), and one of the most dreadful aspects of the situation is what happened to those children as their parents either died or left them behind--or in the case of the little Donner girls, tried to send them ahead. Neglect and starvation were the best they could hope for without their parents' protection (and at least one parent turned against her own child before she herself died), and some of them didn't even get that much, such as Harriet McCutchen, age 1:
Seared into her [Patty Reed's] memory was the plight of the McCutchen baby, after its mother had departed with the snowshoers: 'When the lice (pardon me, sir) were literally eating it up alive. It had scratched, broken the skin over its little bones.'

The adults in the cabin, apparently recognizing the child's fate, but with euthanasia not part of their philosophy, tied its hands down so that it could no longer scratch, and let it cry until the crying ceased.
(244)

And notice the way Stewart dehumanizes Harriet McCutchen (he never calls her by name except in the roster of the Donner Party appended on pp. 291-2, behind both his narrative and the primary documents). He applies Victorian sentimentality to children where he can; where he can't, he treats them as almost sub-sentient. Unimportant.

And, yes, many of these problems are due to this being a book written in 1936, and, yes, I will be looking for more recent scholarly work. But this is a good object lesson in the distortions created by the insistence on creating a narrative out of history, especially a narrative with value-judgments inherent in its structure, and in the distortions created by the patriarchal bias that says Men Are Important. I don't for a moment deny that the men's experience is as important as the women's or as important as the children's. I just deny that some animals are more equal than others.

Date: 2008-01-14 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] liminalia.livejournal.com
I had the same problem with both the Scrabble documentary and the spelling bee documentary. It was all about OMG look at the freaks. I was surprised to learn that championship Scrabble is all about math, however. It takes the fun out of the game for me, a vocabulary geek.

Date: 2008-01-14 06:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kchew.livejournal.com
Fatsis took a good deal of flack from the Scrabble community for the "blue hairs" comment, which has since been turned into a running joke by players. The Scrabble community, by and large, has been happy with the book, and Fatsis is still playing tournament Scrabble when he can.

The math thing (probability, really) is more about probability than anything else; the big guys are mathematicians and musicians, but not all of them. The 2007 American champion is a copyeditor, and a sweeter guy would be hard to find.

Date: 2008-01-14 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] truepenny.livejournal.com
It didn't seem like math so much as a completely different way of looking at words--not as units of meaning but as strings of symbols. As one does with numbers in sudoku puzzles, or (partially) with words in double-crostics, although those are much more closely tied to meanings and syntax.

I noticed that by the last chapter, the narrator (accepting that even in autobiography the "I" is a construct rather than a transparent conveyance of the human being) had come around to a point where he appreciated the words on both levels. Which made me like him a lot.

Date: 2008-01-14 04:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veejane.livejournal.com
I read a very interesting bit in the New Yorker last year about new archaeology work on the Donner Party, and how it challenges parts of both the standard heroic, and standard cannibalistic, narrative, in a way you might find interesting.

Of course, it's not one of the articles they give away online. But I bet any given public library will still have print back-issues.

Summary:
http://www.newyorker.com/archive/2006/04/24/060424fa_fact_goodyear

Citation:
Dana Goodyear, American Chronicles, "What Happened At Alder Creek?," The New Yorker, April 24, 2006, p. 140

Date: 2008-01-14 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] truepenny.livejournal.com
Thank you. That does look interesting.

Date: 2008-01-14 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fidelioscabinet.livejournal.com
The first account of the Donner Party I read was DeVoto's in 1846: Year of Decision, parts of which are available through Googlebooks here (http://books.google.com/books?id=ujRrpTCPYIgC&dq=1846+Year+of+Decision); it was published in 1943, and DeVoto, while also dated, manages to see the women and children as, you know, people. It helps that he quotes memoirs, letters and such, some of which were written by these women and children (it's not impossible to dismiss or make small someone whose account you're quoting, of course, but at least they get a chance to talk in the process), but he may just be better at it than Stewart.

Date: 2008-01-14 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] truepenny.livejournal.com
Yeah, DeVoto's on my list.

Date: 2008-01-14 04:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fidelioscabinet.livejournal.com
He's good and chewy, even when you don't agree.

Date: 2008-01-14 04:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] truepenny.livejournal.com
Chewy would be nice. Stewart isn't chewy at all.

...

o.O

Well, I suppose that completely tasteless pun

...

O.o

Dear god I'm stuck. Ending comment now before things get worse.

Date: 2008-01-14 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fidelioscabinet.livejournal.com
My bad. I should have said something a little less prone to accidents, something like "I find DeVoto's writing to be interesting, and even when I don't agree with him about something it's possible to engage with what he's written in a useful way."

Further reading on the Donner party

Date: 2008-01-14 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
If you are interested in further reading on the Donner Party, you might want to start with this web site:

http://www.xmission.com/~octa/DonnerParty/

It is maintained by a researcher who edited an anthology of primary sources on the Donner party. The site includes a good deal of source material and discusses Stewart's and other books on the subject.

Kristi

Date: 2008-01-14 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hippoiathanatoi.livejournal.com
I agree with you on the pitfalls of the "narrative history" genre, such as the book in question.

That said, I've been doing a fair bit lately on narrative and history in postmodern literature (Doctorow's _Ragtime_ and Graham Swift's _Waterland_ in particular), and a question I've been wrestling with is whether any history can be written without some sort of narrative being imposed on it.

I can't say I've read a single history text that isn't constructed to lead the reader along certain points of interest and towards some sort of destination. Isn't this an example of narrative? And doesn't this then require some sort of value-judgments to be made, if (in nothing else) deciding what ought to be covered and what ought not to be covered?

Date: 2008-01-14 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] truepenny.livejournal.com
Alan H. Nelson's Monstrous Adversary, a biography of the seventeenth Earl of Oxford, is the best example I know of historiography which refuses, as much as is possible, to impose a narrative on its subject. I even posted (http://truepenny.livejournal.com/465995.html) about how frustrating it was to read for precisely that reason.

another book about the Donner Party

Date: 2008-01-14 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avocadovpx.livejournal.com
I haven't read The Ungodly: A Novel of the Donner Party by Richard Rhodes, but I remember reading about it in his book How to Write. He's better known for his historical writing about nuclear technology, for which he's won the National Book Award and the Pulitzer.

However, I expect that if imposing narrative on history is something you want to avoid, reading a novel about history might, hmm, only be useful for the rant you get out of it.

Re: another book about the Donner Party

Date: 2008-01-16 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] truepenny.livejournal.com
I'm actually not even interested in novels about historical events or personages. (I can enjoy historical novels, i.e., novels set in ancient Rome or Elizabethan London or what have you, but even that is a little iffy and works better if there's an sfnal element.) So I wouldn't rant; I just wouldn't finish the book.

Apparently I like the divide between my fiction and my nonfiction to be unambiguous. This may have something to do with why I don't care for mainstream fiction. I don't know.

The Donner Party

Date: 2008-01-16 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jonquil.livejournal.com
Well played. Thanks for the analysis, and for the righteous fury.

Re: The Donner Party

Date: 2008-01-16 09:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] truepenny.livejournal.com
It, um. Wasn't hard.
*g*

(You're welcome and thank you!)

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