another completed draft

[truepenny]

"(Un)fallen"
3,000 words
The pain is intense, sharp, and localizes itself gradually, as Vij comes closer to consciousness, into a throbbing knot on the back of ser skull, just behind ser left ear.

This one may need serious work on the second draft, but I've finally figured out what the action is, and so it is, at least, a draft. And that is not to be sneered at.

Comments

[liminalia.livejournal.com]

Interesting pronoun form. I tend to use "zie-zir", myself, for 3rd person neutral or 3rd-gendered. Is the other form "sie", then?

[truepenny.livejournal.com]

se (nominative)
sem (accusative)
ser (genitive)

[cassandraterra.livejournal.com]

Oh, cool. :)

[mrissa.livejournal.com]

Draft yay!

[pitselly.livejournal.com]

Vij is a really interesting name, thinking about it. I don't want to ask for fear of ruining some plot point or somesuch but. It's very different from your other names so far, which is notable/nice.

[heresluck]

Yay, draft!