Q&A 3

Apr. 8th, 2009 11:26 am
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Q: You are working on a new manuscript you're very excited about when a friend shows you a book you've never heard of. And one of the main characters in that book has the exact same name as one of the characters in your manuscript. What do you do?

Well, first of all, is this a common name (e.g., Stephen), an uncommon but historically real name (Mildmay), a common or uncommon name in a language other than English (Jacqueline Carey's Phedre), or a made-up name (Maiah, the protagonist of the novel I should currently be working on)?

Any of the first three, I laugh, swear, shrug, and carry on. Convergent evolution happens, and it doesn't matter. And people will detect influences in your work whether they're there or not. You can't control that, and trying to outfox it will only make you crazy.

I admit, the fourth scenario would give me a moment's pause, but I think in the end, my reaction would be the same. (I've also read enough sff to notice that even made-up names get reduplicated occasionally. After all, native English speakers are all working with the same toolkit when it comes to putting vowels and consonants together.)

(I would also, I admit, check this published book I'd never heard of to see if the characters themselves are uncomfortably similar. Because that (a.) gets a little Twilight Zone-ish and (b.) would make me want to think about whether the character I'm writing is perhaps a little too much of a type and too little of a character.)

But it also depends on what your relationship to names and naming is. I obsess about names, and once I've decided on a character's name--or if the character comes pre-equipped with a name--I don't change it unless I become utterly convinced that it's wrong. Changing it for lesser reasons will only result in destroying the story (and, yes, I've done that to myself a time or two). So for me, a coincidence of names with some other book matters immeasurably less than having the right name for my characters. Other people may feel differently; if changing a name isn't a big deal to you, and it will make you happier and better able to continue writing and being excited about your project, then go ahead and change it. Because ultimately that's what this boils down to. There's no external reason to worry about it, but if it's screwing up your internal processes, you need to find a way to resolve it.



Q: Will it help if your fans campaign to get you on Daw Books?

A: Thank you, but that's not necessary.

Q: Scott Adams (of "Dilbert" fame) recently claimed on his blog that everything successful can be summed up in one sentence (http://dilbert.com/blog/entry/quality_follows_popularity/) - what would your sentence be for 'Doctrines'?

A: I find that exercise soul-destroying in the extreme. I'm sure it's true, but I don't want to do it. (Dude, I hate trying to write synopses. As [livejournal.com profile] elisem told me [livejournal.com profile] coffeeem once said, "If I could say it in fewer words, I would have!")

Q: What do you think makes it hard for you to get published? Your books are so well written and thought out, I just can't fathom why books like the black magician trilogy (and i love trudi canavan - but it's not quite your calibre *at all*) find success and yours doesn't? I guess thats why i blame the publishers...

A: Objectively speaking, I am one of the minuscule fraction of writers trying to get published who has actually succeeded. So the fact that I have hit a pothole that the state of Illinois would envy is, well, par for the course. Any creative endeavor is a fucking awful way to make a living, if you'll pardon the vulgarity, and especially in the current zombie apocalypse--editors are getting laid off, publishers are wearing sackcloth and ashes, the big box bookstores are running mad in the streets--I'm far from the only one trying to bail out my rowboat with a rusty coffee can.

Also, quality of writing has nothing to do with popularity.


Q: Corambis is portrayed as a sober, industrious place, fantastic with technology but less aware of other aspects of life, particularly the spiritual/imaginative. To what extent (if any) is Corambis an image of (images of) the American North, and in apposition to that, would you consider any aspects of Mélusine/Marathat reflective of the American South?

A: I would agree that the Corambins have a lot in common with Yankees. *g* That said, I don't think the American South, ante- or postbellum, has any greater claim to spiritual/imaginative wisdom than any other part of the United States, and if I located an allegory of the South anywhere in these books, it would be Caloxa and the Mulkist wizards: a largely agrarian society with some valuable traditions which has become corrupted by the practices of its ruling minority. Certainly, one of the models for the Insurgence is the American Civil War. One of the other models is the English Civil War.

Also, I would point out that Corambin spiritual life is flourishing; it's just that the magicians are rationalist technocrats.



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Date: 2009-04-08 06:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] summers-place.livejournal.com
I don't know that I'd classify "Maiah" as a completely made-up name, as it's awfully close to "Maia", and I've encountered at least two or three real-life women named Maia.

Date: 2009-04-08 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] truepenny.livejournal.com
Maiah is male. But, yes, I know Maia (and Maya) are RL names. The seriously made-up names in that book are the other characters: Csevet, Chenelo, Demah.

Date: 2009-04-08 07:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nathreee.livejournal.com
Thanks for answering that. I don't really know you all that well yet, but I thought I'd give it a shot. You probably guessed that this happened to me recently. I got a little insecure when I started reading Blood and Iron, because one of the main characters in my manuscript that's going to be published next year is called Seeker too. I guess I might want to rethink that name, since it originated from a time when I was just making up the story without really thinking about the reasons behind it. I've gron attached to the name, but the meaning might be wrong.

So thanks.

Date: 2009-04-08 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] truepenny.livejournal.com
You're welcome--although I managed to forget "common noun used as a proper name" in my list.

Seeker is common enough as a Thing Characters Do In Fantasy that I wouldn't worry about it (the Seeker in Quidditch is another example)--although by the same token, it is fairly common, which is a good reason to take a long hard look at whether it's the right name.

I can't speak for Bear, of course, but certainly, if I were the author, I wouldn't assume anything but coincidence was behind it.

And congratulations on your impending publication!

Date: 2009-04-09 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nathreee.livejournal.com
Thanks again.

The name is fairly appropriate in this case, I suppose. My Seeker is a man who searches for knowledge in ancient texts and ruins, who can't sit still, no matter what the reasons are to stay home. Since the universes are quite different, Blood and Iron being in the Promethean age, whereas mine is a rather primitive fantasy magocracy, and the characters too, I guess Miss Bear won't mind much.

This being my first publication, I get a little insecure. But I'm sure it'll be fine.

Date: 2009-04-09 12:28 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
The Scott Adams 'hook' thing is probably individual for different people who picked up Melusine. "Gay masochist ex-prostitute wizard' did it for me, but I'm sure it was different for other people. And I totally disagree re quality coming with time. If your writing had not drawn me in from page one I would not have bought the book, EVEN if you had thrown in free steak knives. Also, I can't think of a single series that started off with 'bad writing and an interesting premise' that ended up with good writing a few books down the pike.

Zaf

Date: 2009-04-09 01:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muterari.livejournal.com
It's funny to me how much our own backgrounds influence our interpretation of place in fiction. To me, Corambis and Caloxa evoked images of the Netherlands and other Low Countries of the 17th century)...particularly the somber wardrobe and regulation of prostitution.

Date: 2009-04-10 11:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oceruleanskies.livejournal.com
Yes! That´s what I was thinking as well! So damn matter-of-factly in their tolerance, which I love, really. But on the other hand, that kind of external sobriety also came off the Mayflower, minus the tolerance, that said. To me, Mélusine is the Hybrid Old World, a beautiful painting painted over and over again on the same canvas, sick in so many places. I can see why Corambis might be a breath of fresh air.
And was that a reference to Edgar Allen Poe somewhere in the book?!

Date: 2009-04-10 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] truepenny.livejournal.com
Yes, it was. *g*

Date: 2009-04-09 02:32 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] aerinha
Thank you for being so scrupulous about your cuts for potential spoilers :) My copy of Corambis isn't due to hit the front step till tomorrow... and I'm stalking the UPS guy in my impatience. It's nice, though, to be able to read the other Q&A stuff in the meantime. I especially am enjoying your perspectives on the writing process, both in general and in specific.

Date: 2009-04-09 03:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] razziecat.livejournal.com
Re: names, were you aware that "Felix" means "fortunate one?" Irony, anyone...?

Date: 2009-04-09 03:53 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-04-09 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I just bought Corambis yesterday and read it in a blaze. Cracking good yarn, Ms. Monette!

Three questions:

1) What was the most difficult writing problem you faced with Corambis?

2) I really enjoyed the way that you articulated class issues in Melusine and The Virtu, but I was surprised by the way you handled them in The Mirador. Specifically, in the first two books we learn from Mildmay about how often the decisions of the Mirador's inhabitants have caused pain, fear, and death for the denizens of the lower city. But Mildmay seems disinclined in The Mirador to connect these injustices with their authors. It's not that I'd expect him to stand up and accuse the Lord Protector before Court and Curia, but I had thought he'd at least be angrier in his own head with the representatives of the ruling class he'd met. Why did you go in this direction?

SPOILER QUESTION:

3) Why did Felix not evince more concern about leaving the Clock of Eclipses running?

Thanks so much, and I'll continue to praise and buy your books, no matter which publisher you're with.

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