epiphany

Jun. 22nd, 2011 12:23 pm
truepenny: artist's rendering of Sidneyia inexpectans (ws: damville)
I realized this morning as I was brushing my teeth that Golden Age detective fiction would make ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT Jacobean plays.

(And revenge tragedies are also, in an odd way, almost murder mysteries.)

The deaths are grotesque and imaginative (I've been rereading John Dickson Carr's Henry Merrivale books, and trust me, Jacobean audiences would have loved this shit); the books always have a layer of meta (Carr and Crispin in particular); detectives love both acting and stage-managing (really, starting with Sherlock Holmes, but flowering emphatically in the 30s and 40s--and Ngaio Marsh named her hero for an Elizabethan actor, which is a clue I don't know why I didn't pick up on before), and I can easily imagine Burbage stomping up and down the stage and forcing, by the sheer pressure of his theatricality, the poor benighted murderer to give himself away.

It's perfect.

And now I want to write one.
truepenny: artist's rendering of Sidneyia inexpectans (writing: fennec)
I should descend into the endless hell of revising The Goblin Emperor, and I may even do so this evening.

(Seriously. This book will not fix itself, especially not the big structural problems. And I know what to do; it's just the how that's beating me up.)

However, this afternoon, I have been making notes on projects that aren't ready to be written yet, because if I don't write things down, I will not remember them.
  • This AU-America novel is way more ambitious than I am. Which is a problem, since I actually don't like novels with as much scope as this one is trying to claim it needs (Salem! Mormon Utah! Airships! Lansford Hastings! Circuses! Helen Keller! Frankenstein! George Armstrong Custer! Mammoth Cave! Angels! Demons! Dogs and cats! Living together! Mass hysteria!)
  • otoh, the great thing about writing about Puritans is that you can name characters things like Dread Not Dawson; I don't know anything else about Dread Not yet, except that her older sister is named Remember, but the name is full of promise.
  • Mélusine's equivalent of Jack the Ripper is Jean-the-Knife.
  • Now I just have to figure out which district he preys on. (And approximately three thousand six hundred and fifty-two other things as well. I am terrified that by the time I get Yes, No, Always, Never worked out to the point that I can write it, I will have forgotten most of what I know about Mélusine.)
In acknowledgment and celebration of the fact that I'm working at all, here's that first line meme again.

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truepenny: artist's rendering of Sidneyia inexpectans (writing: hippopotamus)
Draft of a short story finished. (Well, except for all the [1], [2], [3] all the way up to [71] where proper nouns (and a couple common ones) go.) I can't tell you how long it is, because I wrote it entirely longhand (although it runs from the bottom of p. 31v to the top of p. 57 in the knock-off Moleskine notebook* I'm currently using. I can't tell you the title, either, because it doesn't have one. (I thought it did, but it turns out the title I thought it had was not correct at all.)

It has given me a lovely example of the moss-troll problem though: Caesarian section. Even though Julius Caesar was probably not born by Caesarian section, the adjective makes no sense in a world without the word "Caesar."

Notice that although this is not the work I should be doing, I am very grateful nonetheless to have a complete draft of anything.

And on that note, I'm going to give this "sleeping" thing a whirl. I've heard it's fun if you do it right.


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*I will not be buying the Picadilly Moleskine knock-offs again, even though they are about 1/3 as expensive. The bookmark ribbons come out, and the elastic does not elastic properly, and both these things get more annoying rather than less over time.

ahem

Jun. 25th, 2007 06:31 pm
truepenny: artist's rendering of Sidneyia inexpectans (writing: abattoir)
I woke up at six-thirty this morning from a dream about a hideous yellow dressing gown and promptly started writing the first Kyle Murchison Booth story I've written in months.

Twelve hours and three thousand words later, I have a completed draft. Entitled, appropriately enough, "The Yellow Dressing Gown."

This is not even remotely what I was supposed to be doing today, but you know, it feels good.

And I have the whole evening for the work I'm supposed to be doing. We'll see how it goes.



Publishers Weekly reviews The Mirador this week, and says very nice things about it. This makes up for the fact that someone on Amazon has tagged The Mirador as "bad writing" (me and Laurell K. Hamilton all the way, baby). Mélusine has similarly been tagged "awful book." The Virtu, conversely, has been tagged "perfection." Which sums up in a nutshell why I try to pay as little attention to Amazon as possible.
truepenny: artist's rendering of Sidneyia inexpectans (writing: abattoir)
So help me, I just figured out the main plot arc of The Sidhe Tigers, the postcolonial literature of elves baseball novel.

This is indirectly [livejournal.com profile] elisem's fault, because Sidhe Tigers is her work, as is Engineering for Elves and Eating the Dark Flower, and last night she put up earrings called Elves in the Wheatfield Breakdown: a song for banjo, which I was not, alas, quick enough on the draw to bag. But it made me start thinking about The Sidhe Tigers again. And this morning I know things I didn't know last night.

The human protagonist is an African-American slugger named Marigold Dempsey. Last night I didn't know there was a human protagonist.

I don't really groove with the concept of Muses. What I think I have is Cats of Creativity. And one of them just dropped half a very dead vole on my foot.

bookkeeping

Apr. 1st, 2006 12:03 am
truepenny: artist's rendering of Sidneyia inexpectans (writing: fennec)
The Second Son: 547 words

Reason for stopping: Need to know Mordred's Tube station. Also, go to bed already, dingbat.

Other work: Subbed a story. Scheduled doctor's appointments.

Other news: W. B. Yeats? Mad as a fish, my lovelies. Mad. As. A. Fish.
truepenny: artist's rendering of Sidneyia inexpectans (writing: fennec)
The Second Son: 301 words

Every word written is a good word. It may not be right, but it's still good.



Muses resemble women who creep out at night and give themselves to unknown sailors and return to talk of Chinese porcelain.
    --W. B. Yeats, quoted in Brenda Maddox, Yeats's Ghosts: The Secret Life of W. B. Yeats (New York: Perennial - HarperCollins Publishers, 2000).

It worked.

Mar. 29th, 2006 10:57 pm
truepenny: artist's rendering of Sidneyia inexpectans (writing: fox)
The Second Son: 311 words

Not, you know, spectacular progress, but I will take what I can get.

AWBTWYSBD applies.
truepenny: artist's rendering of Sidneyia inexpectans (writing: hippopotamus)
unexpected short story: 1,200 words

Chapter 2 of The Mirador: Ha, she said bitterly.

AWBTWYSBD.

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